Forever mine


The first time they met
On a sunny spring morn
He’d never forget
The smile that she’d worn

The years that followed
Were full of bliss
Or so he’d thought
Until he realised something was amiss

The late nights
The trips away
The silly fights
Could only mean she was going astray

What had gone wrong
He’d never really know
How could a love so strong
Break as easy as a withered bough

If he could not have her
No one would
He’d tried his best to please her
And yet, was sorely misunderstood

As he watched the darkened river
Down his spine
Ran a little shiver
And the thought “Now forever, you’re mine”

(c) Sanch Vee @ Sanch Writes (26 June 2009)

  1. Americanising Desi

    June 27, 2009 at 3:28 pm

    🙂 this is lovely!

    this is magical!

  2. Sanch, the writer

    June 28, 2009 at 7:21 am

    Thanks AD! 🙂 Appreciate the wonderful comment!

  3. Sanch, the writer

    June 29, 2009 at 10:17 pm

    My flatmate thought the ending was too morbid and wondered what was wrong with me! =D Had to convince them that it was based on pure imagination and nothing more… =P

  4. Americanising Desi

    June 29, 2009 at 1:47 pm

    i simply love it … esp that ending! 😀

  5. ani_aset

    July 15, 2009 at 1:25 pm

    Whats wrong PB :)…lovely poem though..i hope you are fine

  6. Sanch, the writer

    July 21, 2009 at 11:14 am

    @ Ani: Nothing wrong! 🙂 Thanks for the nice comment! 🙂

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