Through those little eyes

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I wonder
Who that woman is
The one who is mostly by my side
The one who picks me up
The minute that I cry

I wonder
Who that man is
The one with a cheeky smile
The one who helps the woman out
By staying with me at night

I wonder
Who that little girl is
The one that comes and goes
The one that talks to me non-stop
And sometimes tickles my toes

I wonder
Who that large boy is
The one with the messy clothes
The one whose words make no sense
To me and all in the home

I wonder
Who the other people are
The ones who visit me on different days
They speak gibberish to me
They really drive me insane

I wonder
When I will be able to talk
And walk away from this
To explore the world around
Away from my little crib

I wonder
What lies ahead for me
In this world so very strange
What these people mean to me
And what early memories will remain

(c) Sanch Vee @ Sanch Writes (18 April 2010)

Written for Sunday Scribblings Prompt ‘Wonder’

24 Comments

  1. harini

    April 18, 2010 at 10:53 am

    :). Very well written :).

  2. Varsh

    April 18, 2010 at 11:25 am

    I wonder
    When I’ll be able to write
    In such a simple and lovely way
    What I feel inside
    In and about the world around me! 🙂

  3. americanising desi

    April 18, 2010 at 4:05 pm

    you ve incorporated most of the wonders 🙂

    pleasure to read

    Wonder Full

  4. Sam Liu

    April 18, 2010 at 6:55 pm

    A wonderfully poetic piece. I really enjoyed reading this 🙂

  5. PNA

    April 18, 2010 at 8:57 pm

    It tickled somewhere..u know, because it is so well expressed PB:)

  6. celestialrays

    April 18, 2010 at 10:52 pm

    That’s awesome! Good imagination 🙂

  7. Thomma Lyn

    April 19, 2010 at 12:01 am

    Delightful! What a creative and well-written exploration of the perspective of a child.

  8. deedeekm

    April 19, 2010 at 3:12 am

    aww this is sweet – love the baby’s perspective 🙂

  9. Psych Babbler

    April 19, 2010 at 9:18 am

    I wonder when you will be able to do it Varsha! =P That was great…

  10. Psych Babbler

    April 19, 2010 at 9:19 am

    Welcome to this space! Thank you!

  11. Psych Babbler

    April 19, 2010 at 9:19 am

    Thanks Sam…glad you enjoyed it!

  12. Psych Babbler

    April 19, 2010 at 9:19 am

    Welcome Celestial! And thanks =)

  13. Psych Babbler

    April 19, 2010 at 9:21 am

    Welcome Thomma! And thank you for the lovely words of encouragement… =)

  14. Psych Babbler

    April 19, 2010 at 9:22 am

    Welcome DeeDee! Thanks heaps! =)

  15. geeta232

    April 19, 2010 at 9:39 am

    So simple yet so expressive…great piece

  16. Psych Babbler

    April 19, 2010 at 9:54 am

    Welcome Geeta! And thank you! =)

  17. bini

    April 20, 2010 at 10:48 pm

    Im sure all the babies of the world are loving you!-Bini..(Forgot my login info here)

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