First Crush

A covert look
A small smile
An accidental touch
Sending shivers
Down her spine
Sneaking glances
Trying to catch
His wandering eye
Dropping her books
As he passed by
Rambling speech with
Stutters and mumbles
Incoherent thoughts
Running through her mind
When directly
At her he gazed
On her cheeks
A deep red blush
As she conversed
With her first crush
Written for One Single Impression Prompt 169

Until next time,

Cheers!!!

28 Comments

  1. Nicole Bataclan

    May 22, 2011 at 4:33 pm

     that’s how it feels 🙂

  2. Psych Babbler

    May 22, 2011 at 11:27 pm

    Took me back years ago to try and remember that feeling…it’s funny having
    a crush isn’t it? Waiting for the person to talk to you or communicate in
    some way… 🙂

  3. Titaxy

    May 23, 2011 at 1:31 am

    nice 🙂 took me back some years 🙂 

  4. Write Girl

    May 23, 2011 at 2:03 am

    This is a very cute poem. I enjoyed reading 🙂 

  5. Psych Babbler

    May 23, 2011 at 3:31 am

    Thanks T…yeah took me back to come up with some of those lines… 🙂

  6. Psych Babbler

    May 23, 2011 at 3:31 am

    Welcome here Write Girl! Thanks for the lovely comment… 🙂

  7. Prateek Bagri

    May 23, 2011 at 4:09 am

     Wow! Anecdotes revisited.

  8. Psych Babbler

    May 23, 2011 at 4:11 am

    Brings back memories?? 🙂

  9. bikram

    May 23, 2011 at 9:32 am

    oooh Really 🙂

    Bikram’s
      

  10. Psych Babbler

    May 23, 2011 at 11:10 am

    I’m sure you went through something similar too…and yes, really…years
    ago! 🙂

  11. Andy

    May 23, 2011 at 5:05 pm

    Smiling…you should see the crazy antics I do just to get my wife’s attention! 

    Nicely done.

  12. jidhujose

    May 23, 2011 at 8:28 pm

     lovely crush

  13. Psych Babbler

    May 24, 2011 at 12:55 am

    Welcome here Andy! We all do weird and wonderful things when in love…or
    having a crush on someone! 🙂

  14. Jake George

    May 24, 2011 at 5:52 am

    took me back to high school when I spoke to this girl for the first time ..
    all that came out were broken words and weird syllables …”hi” ..”ho doin” .. “day great” ..she must have tht I’m a retard …lol ..

  15. Psych Babbler

    May 24, 2011 at 6:05 am

    I think most of us interacted that way when we had a crush on someone…it’s
    the minority that were confident!

  16. Teri C

    May 24, 2011 at 4:06 pm

    You captured that first crush just wonderfully.

  17. ms pie

    May 24, 2011 at 5:54 pm

    just the other day i was at a dance and felt this all over again… ain’t it cool… loved the sway and flow this beauty… 

  18. Olive Tree

    May 25, 2011 at 2:17 am

    oh yes, I remember that time. We become more and more biased as we’re getting older and I’m glad I read this because it reminds me of the innocence crush I experienced…long time ago. Lovely poem.

  19. Psych Babbler

    May 25, 2011 at 2:19 am

    Welcome Ms Pie! It’s nice to have these feelings again, isn’t it? 🙂 Glad
    you could experience it…

  20. Psych Babbler

    May 25, 2011 at 2:20 am

    Welcome here Olive Tree! You bet…as we grow older our expectations seem to
    grow as well and we don’t even make fools of ourselves as we did back then!
    Thanks for the lovely comment!

  21. Shail

    May 25, 2011 at 4:14 am

    Nice one on that first crush 🙂

  22. Jingle

    May 27, 2011 at 8:50 pm

    bittersweet,
    lovely said.
    🙂

  23. Psych Babbler

    May 27, 2011 at 9:31 pm

    Welcome here Jingle! Thanks for the comment…it is bittersweet in a way,
    isn’t it? First crushes don’t always work out to be anything more…

  24. Geraldine H

    May 29, 2011 at 2:59 pm

    I agree with Teri, you’ve captured the mood, feelings perfectly. :<)

  25. Psych Babbler

    May 29, 2011 at 10:18 pm

    Welcome here Geraldine! Thanks for the lovely comment… 🙂

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