Where do you go (c) Over Cups of Coffee Where is it you go When you leave me Each night Why don’t you tell me The exact path of Your flight I wait I wonder I live In fear Of not knowing Of yearning Wondering When is it that you’ll return… Until next time, Cheers!!! Share this:Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Google+ (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to email this to a friend (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... Related Creative writing Gargleblaster Poetry Yeah Write Post navigation Friends Or moreQuestion of Life Sanch, the writer Writer | Bibliophile | Word Nerd | Wine drinker | Coffee Snob | Cat Lady 14 Comments Ankita June 30, 2014 at 2:19 pm Reply nice words weaving a suspense that is interesting! Such murky partners are a real headache..hehe! loved it 🙂 Ankita recently posted…Beautiful Bhindi and Borosil ! Glasgowdragonfly June 30, 2014 at 5:29 pm Reply Love the dreamy quality of the word flow here. Good work! Glasgowdragonfly recently posted…Coney Island Love Song Jennifer June 30, 2014 at 8:33 pm Reply These short lones do such a great job of building the feeling of distraction and worry. Jennifer recently posted…Siren Song No. 2 Jennifer June 30, 2014 at 8:33 pm Reply *lines 🙂 Soumya June 30, 2014 at 8:49 pm Reply The open end is the best part of this piece! Soumya recently posted…Guest Post – Sharath Komarraju: The Three Queens of Hastinapur Kristin June 30, 2014 at 9:06 pm Reply The “exact path of your flight” reminds me of how I follow along on-line whenever my husband has a long flight. It’s comforting, even as it’s misleading. Kristin recently posted…Seagull Picnic: yeah write gargleblaster Cindy Knapper June 30, 2014 at 10:22 pm Reply Very nice imagery! Cindy Knapper recently posted…A Lover’s Search chamblee54 July 1, 2014 at 12:10 am Reply Why would you want to fly? Mermaids swim. chamblee54 recently posted…The Happy Mermaid Kathy Combs July 1, 2014 at 12:40 am Reply I like the tension you built with your words and the wondering question at the end. Nice! Kathy Combs recently posted…The Mermaid Elixir Kir July 1, 2014 at 12:59 am Reply is he out stealing mermaids? I loved the flow of this, the questioning was tense even if the answers weren’t coming. Kir recently posted…The Siren’s Secret that cynking feeling July 1, 2014 at 5:43 am Reply Poor thing – it’s the not knowing that stinks. that cynking feeling recently posted…office politics KymmInBarcelona July 1, 2014 at 8:29 pm Reply I already have about five different ‘you’s for this. Lovely, dreamy words! KymmInBarcelona recently posted…The Siren Call CRD July 1, 2014 at 11:29 pm Reply Sometimes it’s better not to know where someone goes. It’s a recipe for self-destruction, but what you don’t know about can’t kill you. On second thoughts, don’t be a doormat. Shake off the dust and walk away. Updated my blog with a picture-parody of SHOLAY. Hope you like it. Cheers CRD CRD recently posted…GALAT PICCHAR – SHOLAY Ann Bennett (@AnnBennett12) July 2, 2014 at 2:19 am Reply Great job of building emotion. I can see a child worried over a parent leaving for work and not understanding. Leave a Reply Cancel Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email.