Poetry

Shh…

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Sounds of the cars
I hear whizzing by
Low hum of the insects
Engraved in my mind
No sound of laughter or
Chatter of happy voices
Everything is, but silent. To me.

(c) Sanch Vee @ Sanch Writes (12 August 2009)

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8 Comments

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    Titaxy
    August 12, 2009 at 3:30 pm

    πŸ™‚ nice!

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    ani_aset
    August 12, 2009 at 6:33 pm

    ahan PB but you used Silent in the last line..is that allowed πŸ˜‰

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    Sanch, the writer
    August 13, 2009 at 11:02 am

    @ Titaxy: Thanks! πŸ™‚

    @ ani: Well, does it make a difference that the acrostic is ‘silence’? I have no idea about the rules anyway…just giving this a shot. If it’s not allowed, maybe I should change the word to ‘quiet’. What say?

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    Psych Babbler
    August 13, 2009 at 11:02 am

    @ Titaxy: Thanks! πŸ™‚

    @ ani: Well, does it make a difference that the acrostic is ‘silence’? I have no idea about the rules anyway…just giving this a shot. If it’s not allowed, maybe I should change the word to ‘quiet’. What say?

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    ani_aset
    August 13, 2009 at 11:04 am

    m sorry that was for you PB πŸ˜›

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    Gigi
    August 14, 2009 at 7:47 pm

    Beautiful post.Have a happy Independence Day!

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    Sashindoubutsu
    August 28, 2009 at 10:05 am

    Very creative πŸ™‚

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    Americanising Desi
    September 4, 2009 at 4:28 pm

    neat!

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    Sanch, the writer
    September 6, 2009 at 9:41 am

    @ Sash: Thanks heaps!

    @ AD: Thank you!! πŸ™‚

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    Psych Babbler
    September 6, 2009 at 9:41 am

    @ Sash: Thanks heaps!

    @ AD: Thank you!! πŸ™‚

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