Flash Fiction

55 Fiction – Only mine

I stared at the picture of my wife. So beautiful. So striking. I love her dearly. Passionately. And I thought she’d felt the same.

Until I found the letters of her betrayal.

But I don’t want to think about that now. Not when I have her forever.

Locked away in my basement. Only mine.  

***This has been written for Magpie Tales 70***

Until next time,
Cheers!!!

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16 Comments

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    Mukul Rajsingh
    June 23, 2011 at 11:20 pm

    love turns possessive 🙂 only I can have her love.
    nice

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    soulmate
    June 24, 2011 at 4:45 am

    This one scares me.. Is the wife dead? Is she buried in the basement? Or the letters are in the basement?

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    Prats
    June 24, 2011 at 4:54 am

    Interesting read

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    Psych Babbler
    June 24, 2011 at 6:36 am

    Welcome here Mukul! Thanks for the comment…love can turn some kinds of
    people possessive…to crazy degrees! 🙂

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    Psych Babbler
    June 24, 2011 at 6:36 am

    Whoops…sorry to scare you…but I guess it did it’s job! Well, I was
    thinking more like locked in the basement…but you can read into it what
    you want! 🙂 Open to interpretation…

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    Psych Babbler
    June 24, 2011 at 6:37 am

    Thanks Prats!

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    Aathira Nair
    June 24, 2011 at 9:28 am

    Eikes… scary… sounds like to me… killed and buried in the basement 🙁

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    Psych Babbler
    June 24, 2011 at 10:07 am

    Disqus generic email templateOoh I like that interpretation too…like I said before, it’s open to interpretation. My line of thought was locked in the basement but killed and buried sounds more morbid… 😛

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    The Lover
    June 24, 2011 at 1:34 pm

    Sad and beautiful.

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    Kesaiserris
    June 24, 2011 at 1:55 pm

    This was surprisingly very dark love story. Enjoyed it greatly =)

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    Titaxy
    June 24, 2011 at 2:36 pm

    creepy 😀 love does make one go crazy, eh? 😛

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    Psych Babbler
    June 25, 2011 at 9:38 pm

    Thanks TL! 🙂

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    Psych Babbler
    June 25, 2011 at 9:39 pm

    Welcome here Kesaiserris! And thanks for the lovely comment! 🙂

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    Psych Babbler
    June 25, 2011 at 9:39 pm

    😀 Hopefully, not too many people go this crazy T! 😛

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    Poetry Is My Sunshine
    June 27, 2011 at 11:09 pm

    powerfully sad.

    smart magpie.
    share 1 to 3 poems with poetry potluck week 41 today.

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    Psych Babbler
    June 28, 2011 at 9:51 pm

    Thanks PIMS! Will pop over to poetry potluck and check it out….

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