Poetry

Uncomfortable Feelings

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This feeling of dread
Tells me something is wrong
Or that something bad will happen
So that I’ll be unable to stay strong
And everything I’ve done
Will matter no long
All I can hope
Is that it means nothing
It is just an uncomfortable feeling
That within moments will be gone
So I can continue with life
And finally move on

***This has been written for One Single Impression Prompt 205***

Until next time,

Cheers!!!

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16 Comments

  • Reply
    Ramesh Sood
    January 29, 2012 at 7:25 am

    Cheers!! I am sure the feeling went and all is wonderful and happy….

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    My Era
    January 29, 2012 at 9:27 am

    A feeling that rings loud and clear in my ears many times…beautifully written PB 🙂

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      Psych Babbler™
      February 1, 2012 at 12:14 am

      It’s a horrible feeling, isn’t it? I hate it every single time! Thanks MyEra

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    Olive Tree
    January 29, 2012 at 12:16 pm

    Oh, I do hope everything will be okay too. Don’t like feeling of dread myself. Take care. Your expression was nicely penned.

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      Psych Babbler™
      February 1, 2012 at 12:21 am

      Welcome here Olive Tree! Thanks for the comment…that feels truly sucks, doesn’t it?

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    Ron.
    January 29, 2012 at 12:28 pm

    Oh, would that dread were such a fleeting thing for everyone…Some suffer from it all day, every day.

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      Psych Babbler™
      February 1, 2012 at 12:26 am

      Welcome here Ron! I can’t even begin to imagine what it must be like to have that feeling every day, all day! It’s bad enough when it occurs occasionally and lasts a day or two!

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    Bikramjit
    January 30, 2012 at 10:01 am

    hmm I wanted to write something but did not find words to write .. that moment was gone 🙂

    nice one

    Bikram’s

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    The Ugly Caterpillar
    February 4, 2012 at 1:26 am

    Felt so familiar! A little bit scary actually..

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      Psych Babbler™
      February 5, 2012 at 12:24 am

      Welcome here The Ugly Caterpillar! It is a bit scary that most of us go through this, huh?

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    raggedglory
    February 5, 2012 at 3:10 am

    very evocative. would have been even better to have a picture of the same ocean and the same sky in a better moment. things change significantly, irrespective of what we may do/ not do. and there surely are times when the change is for the better- not necessarily because of our efforts, but in spite of them!!

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      Psych Babbler™
      February 22, 2012 at 10:57 pm

      Welcome here Raggedglory….you make a good point! It would have been great to have another pic. And I agree…things sometimes just change even without us doing anything…

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    Peeves
    February 6, 2012 at 8:10 am

    Very nice. Liked it.

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